Not much to say about this one other than I think I might have under sold the idea- it’s always a fine line between guiding the pun and hammering it into your audience’s face and I’m not sure I’ve quite hit the mark with this one. Ah well, let’s chalk it up as a lesson learned.
Hmm. Yeah, I think I’ll redraw this when I have a bit more time.
Sorry it was a bit of a wasted trip but thanks for stopping by.